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Reckedjaw screeched one last time and dropped to the ground.

Tadpole got up.Blood welled from her back where Reckedjaw had scraped her.

Reckedjaw screeched.He rolled onto his back, scraping Tadpole off of him.

Pond and Frost stared at Rayshine."Will our sister be ok if she keeps on fighting him?"

Tadpole nudged Rayshine."Rayshine?Rayshine?Are you ok?"Tadpole turned around and held a cold glare with Reckedjaw.She jumped at him, raking at his face.She landed on his back.She grabbed his arms and made him wobble till he flipped over onto his sides.


"Get off me, you lazy kittypet!"

Reckedjaw yowled.He turned around and jumped fiercely at Rayshine.He raked his claws against her side.

Reckedjaw turned and hissed at Tadpole.He un-sheathed his claws and raked at her ears.

"Rayshine's right!I'm not a kittypet!Look at the things I caught!"Tadpole pushed the plump magpie and vole towards him.

"Thank you!"Reckedjaw grabbed them and took a bite out of both of them.

Reckedjaw hissed,"My parents and kin came from twolegplace, but in the allies!They were BloodClan members!"

((I'm emmbarressed!I spelled terriory wrong!I need to slow down on typing...Nah...))
Reckedjaw stared at Rayshine."Kittypets can't be members!They only know a soft life!They can't hunt, fight for their clan, be starved, they just can't be warriors!"

Reckedjaw came over to see what's happening.He spotted the kittypets."What are three kittypets doing on our terriotyr?!"he asked madly.

Syeira-la wrote: "((Wretched, :) ))

"Hey, the more the merrier!" Rayshine laughed, looking happily at Pond and Frost. "Hi, welcome to Sunclan.""

((Thanks))

Tadpole looked up at Rayshine.((Tadpole's very small.))

"I have to take care of something real quick, Rayshine.Be right back."Tadpole ran towards the voice."It's you guys!"

"Tadpole, we missed you!Where did you go?"

"Pond, Frost, nothing to worry about.I'm ok.I'm just not living with our twolegs any more."

Pond stared at Frost."Twolegs?What are those?"

Tadpole sighed."They're what keep us as pets.They are horrid things!"

Pond looked up at Tadpole."But we -and they- really miss you!Come back!"

"I'm staying with Sunclan!They treat alot better than those wretched twolegs!"Tadpole turnen to look at Rayshine."And when I first walked in, I made a best firned right away!"

Pond and Frost looked sadly at eachother."If you're staying, we're staying."

Syeira-la wrote: "((Girl, lol))

Rayshine gave Tadpole and encouraging smile and nodded."

((You aren't on anymore again?*cries*))
"Tadpole!!!Tadpole!!!!!!Where are you, sis?"Two cats were looking for Tadpole.

Name:Pond
Gender:Tom
Rank:Kittypet, soon gonna join.(Tadpole's brother)
Pelt:Gray~blue, like Tadpole's
Personality:Awesome, funny, careless, ect...

Name:Frost
Gender:♀
Rank:Kittypet, soon gonna join.(Tadpole's sister)
Pelt:White
Personality:Nice, caring, loving, loyal, loves kits, ect...

Tadpole waited for an answer from Hawkstar.She walked away, Hawkstar wasn't answering.Tadpole came up to Rayshine.

((You aren't on anymore?*cries*))

name:Wreckedjaw
gender:Tom
Rank:Warrior
Pelt:A light brown color.Has a twisted jaw.
Personality:Fierce, tough, loyal, friendly, protects at alot of times, ect...

((Yayz!You're on!Is Rayshine a girl or a boy?))
Tadpole looked back at Rayshine.She was able to feel Rayshine looking at her.

Animal Lover Forever! (Katelyn) wrote: "Hawkstar called Tadpole over."

Tadpole ran over to Hawkstar."Hello.I'm Tadpole.Yes?You needed me?"