SpottiPup407’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2009)

SpottiPup407’s comments from the ♥♥♥Cinderpelt Lovers♥♥♥((Organization in Progress)) group.

((Are you still on?Sorry, didn't see this comment until now.but...Hi!))

((Yeah, that would work.))

((kk.Can you make it fast?Wait!G2g, do it tomorrow.))

(When?Now?))

((I mean, they attack him, but don't kill him RIGHT AWAY.Ravenscreech has a chance to fight, but doesn't win.))

((Well, I didn't know they were still plotting...Fine, you can just kill Ravenscreech.But not right away...))

((Well, I'll do that if you don't like this:How about Ravenscreech never heard any of their conversation, and her came a little after ummm..they finished their conversation?If not, you can kill him not and I'd want Pantherstorm as his mate.))

((Well, can't Ravenscreech have heard like only a tiny bit of it, not their huge plot so he doesn't tell anyone?'Cause I really want Ravenscreech to live for a little bit longer, at least until he has kits so that his memory would live on forever.))

((Fine, you can kill Ravenscreech.But how about someone becomes his mate first, he has kits, and then they kill him?I want the memory of Ravenscreech to live on forever.))

((Ummmm....I don't really want him to die...))

((How 'bout they just attack Ravenscreech, 'cause during their conversation, Ravenscreech was outside the Training Hollow listening to it?And they could take Ravenscreech to Sunningrocks, making him think that they are hunting.But as Ravenscreech stalks a mouse, they attack him?So, do you like it?But you could fix your characters' role a little bit.I'm just giving some ideas.))

Ravenscreech yawned once, his back arching.He padded over to Flamesoul."You happy you don't have to be told what to do by me?"Ravenscreech snarled."You're just lucky you became a warrior."

((???Idk))

Ravenscreech's tail flickered back and forth.

((Hi!))

Ravenscreech sighed in relief.He finally had that apprentice off his back!

((Hi, people!))

((Oh.I think that Sephy is on...Just not Roleplaying in here...))

((IDK.I barely know that's happening in the Rp...))

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