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"Ravenscreech has been killed by a fox...And...Well, I don't know how Echofrost."She looked back at Hailfrost and Flamesoul.I found Hailfrost and Flamesoul by their bodies when I heard Ravenscreech's well...screech.I guess his name kinda suits him.But Flamesoul and Hailfrost said that they tried to kill the fox that killed Ravenscreech before he died, but they failed.But then I walked away for a little bit, and then I turned around and saw Echofrost's body."Dapplefrost knew lying was bad, but she wouldn't wanna waste her life.Flamesoul and Hailfrost would have her in their paws before she could even finish her sentence of telling on them.

Dapplefrost ran up to Flamestorm."Flamestorm, could you gather some rosemary and mint for Echofrost's and Ravenscreech's moruning ceremony?"Dapplefrost asked her."I'll come with you, too."

Blazepaw smiled, his smile very evil."We can.For our sake, we're StarClan!We can do anything we want!We can make it rain on them, we could visit their dreams and attack them in it, and when they wake up, they find scratches on them, we can do what we want."

((Ummm...Dapplefrost already told Swantail about Ravenscreech dying...Oh, well))

Dapplefrost went and grabbed Flametail.They padded over to a little stream and both swiped their paws along the edges.They gathered some wet moss and brought it back to camp.They squeezed to water onto Ravenscreech's fur and started rubbing it around, cleaning his pelt from the fox dung.Then they started licking his pelt shiny clean."Can anybody grab some mint and rosemary?"Dapplefrost asked, raising for voice.She moved over to where Echofrost was laying and squeezed some water onto her fur, rinsing away the blood.Then she started licking her, too.Finally, Ravenscreech and Echofrost looked like the cleanest cats that ever existed in the Clans.

((She was getting everything ready for Ravenscreech...Then she was going to grab Echofrost's body...))

Without waiting for an answer, Dapplefrost padded back to the spot where a fox supposivly(have no idea how to spell it)killed Ravenscreech.She grabbed Echofrost's limp body and carried it back to camp, too.She lay her right by Ravenscreech's body.

Blazepaw shook his head."I don't know who's been killing all of the other cats, but Ravenscreech and Echofrost have died because of those stupid cats Flamesoul and Echofrost.They don't deserve their warrior name."

Dapplefrost glared at Hailfrost."If that is the truth, then, yes.He was killed by a fox.We need to get him ready for his mourning ceremony,"Dapplefrost said, her tail flickering."I'll go ask Swantail is she can help gather moss."Dapplefrost headed towards the nursery."Swantail, sadly, Ravenscreech had just recently been killed by a fox.And I know you're going to have your kits soon, but could you be kind enough and go gather some wet moss so we can clean his pelt?"

Blazepaw padded to Falconwing."Falconwing, I've been watching the ThunderClan camp, and it seems that Ravenscreech and Echofrost have just died.We can't just leave their spirits their.Would you bring their spirits up while I watch ShadowClan camp?"Blazepaw asked, his ear twitching.

((Let's wait for Syeira to answer..))

((Ummm...Dapplefrost doesn't know that Hailfrost and Flamesoul did it..She just knows that they killed Echofrost, and she's nice enough to not tell on them for that.))

Dapplefrost entered through the gorse tunnel into camp, the weight of Ravenscreech's body slowing her down.She padded to the middle of camp, and gently lay his body down.She padded to the fresh-kill pile."Nightspark, could you go quickly tell a few warrior that Ravenscreech has died and tell them to tell some more cats and so on, so on?Then can you kindly have them go moss collecting with you?If you don't have anything else to do?"

Dapplefrost dodged it, though, slicing across Hailfrost's eyes.She dove for Hailfrost's belly, knocking her over.Her back paws pinned Hailfrost down as the other paws worked on raking her belly.Her jaws closed in around her neck.She felt blood come into her mouth from Hailfrost's neck, then she jumped off of her."Don't attack me or any other cats unless you wanna die...!"Dapplefrost ended with saying that, and continued lugging Ravenscreech's body to camp.

Dapplefrost stared in confusion.But then she swiftly ran back to camp to tell the leader.But as she got back, she noticed the leader's absence, so she went back to where Hailfrost is at."Now, you'd better have a good reason for killing Echofrost, or the next cat who will die will be you."She said, swiftly padding to Ravenscreech's limp body.She grabbed him be the scruff and dragged him back to camp.

Dapplefrost was out hunting by herself, too, hearing the same faint cry.She ran towards the sound of it, but she was too late.She saw Ravenscreech's limp body on the ground, covered is fox scnet...and..another scent of two cats...But she couldn't quite tell whose it was.She turned her head to the side, looking at Flamesoul and Hailfrost."What happened to Ravenscreech?Did a fox attack him?"she asked with worry in her eyes.

awww!Falconwing is so cute!

Name:Ravenscreech
Gender:Tom
Old rank:Warrior
Old Clan:Ancient ThunderClan
Pelt:Jet black with many many scars
Eyes:Blue, I think...
Personality:A little strict, nice, fun, kind, friendly, brave, adventurous, is kit-loving, would've made a great deputy.
Kin:Open
Old mentor(When he was an apprentice):Lightwind
Mate:Swantail
Crush:Swantail
Reason why he died:Flamesoul and Hailfrost are evil kitties in his Can.He was the mentor is Flamesoul, and he really hated him.Flamesoul and Hailfrost planned to kill both their mentors at some time, but Ravenscreech got killed 'cause he walked in on their conversation.
Other:...

((I liked Ravenscreech..But it had to be done eventually.))

((I know, but he doesn't die quite yet...Well, he does in this post.Just not at the beginning.))

Ravenscreech's eyes flew wide open.He took one paw and raked at across Hailfrost's face.He tried to make her let go, but nothing happened.He screeched once, it a small one.He knew that anything he did was useless, but he screamed one last time for help.Birds fluttered away at the noise.He felt his heart pound slower than before and blood pouring from his neck.His mind was swirling with dizziness.He felt like the world was turning black and fading away, his eyes closing shut, his body limp.He felt one more drop of blood pour from his neck, then everything was silent for him.He was dead.

Ravenscreech yowled."Heard what?I didn't hear anything about whatever you guys were talking about!"Ravenscreech spat.He rolled over, shaking the cat off of his leg.Blood trickled from the scratches there.He dashed forward and leaped, grasping Hailfrost's head between his front legs.He bit tightly into her ear, then pulled away.It left a little mark.He kept on holding tight onto her head, hoping that he would be able to suffocate her.

((Yep.))
Ravenscreech's eyes flickered from Flamesoul to Hailfrost as they looked angerily at him.

((Yay!Roleplay?))