Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten) Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten)’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)



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only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 04:15AM

20123 There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism. It helps you grow.
With my story Destined, the first few chapters are absolutly horrible in regards to grammar. But i got better the longer i wrote.
The same thing will happen to you. I mean, seriously i've read some stories on here where the grammar has been absolutly horrible, so i'm sure it's not that bad.

Let me know if u decide to post anything, cos i'll read it for you and let you know what i think if you want.

Anyway i g2g, but hopefully we'll talk soon
ttyl.....
bye xoxo
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 04:05AM

20123 You can always go over you're story and change and edit the errors. That's what i do. It can take some time, but it's worth it in the end.

You know, lot's of people post their stories online here. Maybe you can do the same. It's a great way to get advice and see how people like your story.
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:59AM

20123 Lol.....

Me too. I've always loved writing. Idea's always come to me and i find it to be a wonderful way to relax.
=) I'm not too bad with the grammar and all that. I have to work on it a bit more but.

Haha, i do that sometimes too. I'll just free write and then later on, sometimes days later, i'll read over it and just be shocked over what i've written. Sometimes it doesn't make sense lol
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:54AM

20123 Um, it's called Destined. It's kinda hard to explain without going into detail. It's a vampire story lol. It's actually pretty popular. You can check out what it's about on my profile if u want.
I don't actually expect you to read it. Trust me, it's really long.

I've had writers block and i'm trying to get over it haha
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:47AM

20123 I am =)
I'm working on a new chapter of a story on here......
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:26AM

20123 I'm not reading anything at the moment either. I'm about to start Sea Glass by Maria V. Snyder though.....

Ok, maybe i'll chat with u then :)
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:20AM

20123 Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel* wrote: "haha, im not studying... you cant study for it! :\

eep, i gotta go
ttyl bye
=)"


By Soph :)

So Kaycee...what are you reading right now? Anything good??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:16AM

20123 Kaycee wrote: "Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel* wrote: "Hey, yeah im still sick too.. its horrible, i hate feeling like this.
i have QCS exam in 3 days.. so im scared outta my pants for that :\
what about you guys? whats ..."


Yes, you're lucky in the retrospect. Trust me, it's sooooooo stressful
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:10AM

20123 You're welcome Kaycee.

Really Soph? My HSC doesn't start for a while yet......
But i can imagine how scared u'd be. I hope ur studying.
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:04AM

20123 Kaycee wrote: "My sister actually has tonsillitis.

really bad aswell.. coughing up blood and stuff :("


Wow, that's terrible! And to think i thought i had it bad. I hope she gets better soon
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 03:00AM

20123 Kaycee wrote: "Aww just family & health issues....kinda getting sick of it all!

Nothing much

What about you?"


I'm sick atm. It's this horrible flu i've had for weeks. It's decided to rear it's ugly head again. Thank GOD it's the weekend. Seriously, there's no way i'd be able to drag myself to school like this.

Hey Soph =)
Hou r ya??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 02:52AM

20123 Lol, you don't sound so sure. What hav u been up 2??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 02:45AM

20123 I'm good. How about youself??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 27, 2010 02:43AM

20123 I am.
R u still there??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 26, 2010 09:05PM

20123 Ellen ♥ wrote: "Rebecka wrote: "awwww mahn i always miss everything!!!!!
god i have to get off like now ='(
i think everyone should just send me messages and catch me up to ate on there lifes....
like rach, sop..."


I think that's how everyone feels lol

Anyone on???
Percy Jackson (44 new)
Aug 26, 2010 08:10AM

20123 Haha =)
Percy Jackson (44 new)
Aug 26, 2010 03:16AM

20123 Oh, lol ok.
Haha, i bet you do Ellen! I imagine your mind is a very confusing place to be ;)
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 26, 2010 02:29AM

20123 Yeah, i'm here :)
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 26, 2010 01:31AM

20123 anybody on now???
only two!!! (7212 new)
Aug 25, 2010 08:47PM

20123 N e 1 on???