Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten)’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)

Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten)’s comments from the all things supernatural group.

Oh, how wonderful for you. Happy Birthday if i don't get to tell you =)

What are you getting/do you want??

I'm good.
Ahhhhh.....no comment ;P
Um, not so good, but i'm hoping to be inspired soon.
how about you? Hows ur story going??

I am =)

how ya going?

anyone on now???

Is any1 on????

I'm on now
n e 1 there??

i g2g have dinner but i'll talk to u soon

bye!

Cool! Cos people often wonder about that.....

Hey, i read your chapter.

It was good so far.
Was that really the correct Latin translation, or did you use random Latin???

Yeah ;)

Haha, my laptop is having a real bad day....it keeps not letting me access sites and it's pissing me off

oh, i'll check it out =)
....just give me a few moments

You're welcome!

How about.....

Should I choose the right one, i don't know how,
My future lies with all of you now.

Just change that and it will be fine

Yes, it does.... the only problem i have is that you used a line that ended with now twice. I think you need to find somthing that rymes with now, insdead of using it twice

Yeah, sorry i was distracted.

What's the favor??

Lol

Cool. It's always good to know you ending. Personally, i find the beginning and ending to be the easiest bits. It's the middle bit that gets me.....

Np...

You'll find more people like mysteries.

Oh, an idea! Always try to end your chapters on a bit of a cliffhanger/mystery....people will be more interested

It was good. Just remember to focus on grammar. You didn't make many mistakes, so that was good.

I wonder what Alyssa has to decide? Hmmmmm....