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Artemus frowned knowing very well that she was referring to Elizabeth Bathory. He began to worry if she was being entertained by him and once he bores her he was as good as dead drowning in a pool of blood of the ones he loved. Artemus nodded casually, "Right then, I suppose you want to hit the strongest ties first. You obviously caused some fraction with Max and Ian perhaps we dig into their more personal lives. Max is shaken but perhaps if you start messing with Ian and put her in a situation that she can do nothing to stop then you can truly break her and her boy toy." He threw out the suggestion as he spoke it. She wasn't in any desire to ever use him for anything more than a pawn he accepted it and his own thoughts to her plans would never be taken into any form of respect. Or at least that is how he has taken to perceiving her. Every mortal world creature seemed to be inferior to her. He allowed a sly smirk to work across his lips. "So tonight I'll convince Vari to leave the hospital with the twins and I can get her out of reach. You can play with the others all week long and Vari can be safe at a distance. The Devereux family will be all yours. Not to mention whomever it is that you plan to ruin the life of. "
((I was thinking possibly that it could be her that turns her own half-brother, Kellan, into a Sleepwalker.))

Fiend that goes for you as well.

Hey everyone sorry everything is so hectic right now. I hardly have time to get on the computer due to having no internet except when I'm at work and this week I have been celebrating my birthday with many of my friends. Today was the final day until next of celebration as it is now my birthday. I hope everyone is enjoying their weekend though. :) I'll be on a lot tonight and gone for two days until I go back to work.

Ian knew better than to argue with Max no matter how much he wanted to he certainly was not about to. He asked no questions as he moved around to grab hold of Eli. "Come on Kali. You have injury deflecting we can use that while Max distracts we can run out the front." He turned to Kellan and glared down, "Stay with Ciara and Malaki. I'm going to meet you at the house, do you understand?"
Kellan moved on next to Malaki. "Got it, so lose these crazy people who you seem to think are out to get us and instead of serving them like I do all my customers I'm going to run in the other direction. When can we expect you at the house?"
Ian shook his head, "Don't." He got a good hold on Eli and moved over to the door. "Max, when you have fought all you can lose them before dusk. Come to the house and we can fix you up well enough so you can heal."
Kellan was freaking out and seeing the large wolf picked up by his brother made him know whatever was going on was serious. It obviously had nothing to do with the big guys getting out of the vehicles and walking over toward the cafe door carrying guns. "So back door, right? We can take the garbage door." He nodded to Malaki so he knew to make sure to follow, "Stay close they alley is right next to these guys. We are basically sneaking behind them."
Ian nodded as Kellan spoke, "Here take my car." He held up wolf-Eli with one arm and tossed the keys to him. "Not a scratch." He said pointedly. Kellan wasted no time. "Alright then, let's go." He moved behind the counter expecting the two to be keeping up with them. He quickly moved for the back door when the handle turned.

Artemus smirked, "Did you catch any names? I can do my research. The society cut me from their records and well, I more than likely have a hit out on me now. I can always just ring them up as to them I'm an off the record rogue hunter. I am basically a mercenary for them. Give me the word and I'll find 'out what I can. I must have passed them before I ended up here." He stepped over with a frown, "Senka...I can never be bored with someone who threatens my life at least a healthy five times a day. I'm only trying to throw out options. However, I would like to know what is your endgame? I mean of course you are going to come out on top and have Damien's soul or whatever debt it is you are here to collect but how far are you wanting to make this torture last for him? Isn't his deal's due date up at the birth of his first born?" Artemus was intrigued how the whole serving the devil thing worked. He was astounded anyone would serve someone beyond themselves simply to appease said person. How did any of them know that Satan was even real at all?

Salem let go of her shoulder, "Okay, fine, I get it." He stepped back for a moment and a curious grin slowly worked at the corners of his lips. "Just don't leave right off. I get it, that you despise this guy and honestly I'm still at odds with him too." He stepped away from both of them. "However, simply by being around you I'm not even Ascended yet and I can feel the power surging inside of you like you are a nuclear power plant about to blow. I was like that too, before I died and revived myself and before I nearly died and my sister's spirit popped inside my body and Hekate decided to follow closely. I have felt that...I still feel that. As a Witch who believes in a democracy do you not also feel you should have been given proper training and proper knowledge on how to harness your own abilities? I'm sure you have already Ascended and if I tried to tap into the one power I have absolutely no control over I would see a lot of trauma in your head. Would you want other Witches to go through the same life you have that brought you here simply
passing through Grievance Ridge?" Salem's winds began to swirl around him slowly becoming quite visible. It was only a moment before his eyes closed that his body was picked off the ground. The skies seemed to darken rather menacingly as a ferocious storm was being brewed above. Salem slowly came down and touched the ground. He was breathing heavily once the wind dispersed and the clouds finally broke with a loud thunder. Salem looked up and light rain started to come through. "I have control because I was given the training I require. Could you imagine what might happen if I tried that and still had no control?" Ash did not speak a word. He knew a lost cause when he saw one and even if it wasn't one person was not worth the fight. He had a hold world to push in a direction that many would go against, but he knew he had to push them to the new era anyway. He simply watched Salem and started to understand that the kid was fighting for more than just himself. He was truly thinking on the side of other people which meant he would be one of the better aspects to the High Coven that Ash was putting together to rule over the people.

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Salem looked at Ash a bit off as the girl walked away. He had no idea just what stirred him to be here at this very moment, but he knew that Ash was only trying to help and he could respect that because, well, Salem has always been a real fuck-up at life even when all he wanted to do was help. "Hey! Don't just go like that. No one just passes through Greivance Ridge. You either live here and remain here until death and sometimes even after or you happen here and well as I said you remain. Our cemetery is so large for that very reason." Salem pushed past Ash and the wind seemed to pick up with him. Leaves and vines all seemed to blow around wildly as he tried to catch up to the girl who seemed to not understand why she was even here at all. It made him feel really off when she had acted as if someone was beside her. "Ash is only trying to help and it's Witches like you who think they know what's best for their entire kind when no power to restore balance was placed upon them that just don't understand any of this. Grievance Ridge is a calling card and you are here for something so don't hold back cause I'm betting Ash back there already knows why you are here." Salem caught up to her closing the distance and the wind seemed still so furious for a day that was once sunshine and cool sea breezes. He placed his hand on her shoulder gently. "I denied him the respect he deserved for too long and before I knew it I was being told he is a bad guy. I've seen what he can do and I know the power he holds. I know because his mother or grandmother or whoever she is lives inside of me. I'm here to keep him in line apparently and I know you have a destiny that led you here just as great." Okay, so Salem was a bit dramatic. He always had a flare for dramatics even when playing his sports at school.
Ash moved behind him rather calmly, "Salem, you are right...I'm only here to help. I was given these powers so I can help and your brother unlocked my powers because it was his destiny to make his own demise. However, I cannot force it upon her. I do not control freewill and I refuse to do so unless need be. She must find her path on her own terms or spend forever searching for it. I am not going to influence anyone. She is already upset at my efforts to make a true union with mortals." Ash sighed sounding rather benevolent at this point. "If and when she decides it is time to truly know what she seeks she will and until then you are to undergo your own training. I do believe Kali is making you the Seer apprentice, yes? Do you not feel it necessary to focus more on your harnessing of power and less on others?" His eyebrow raised as if challenging Salem to disagree.
Salem could do nothing. He let go of Keiko's shoulder and downed his head, "Fine, but whatever it is you are looking for...For what it's worth...I hope you find it." Salem didn't move, but he was trying to process through his own mind what might occur in this world if the mortals strike out against the Witches. What if a true war was to come?

Danke :)

@Fiend, ☽Ƥσωєяѕ & Aвιℓιтιєѕ☾
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— Telekinesis
— Spell-casting
to be discovered
— Pyrokinesis
— Body Part Substitution
— Smoke Generation (hide spoiler)]
The powers need to be given a bit more detail.
Also, All Witches hold telekinesis but some hold an affinity for it as a power and therefore it is more broadened.
Please, add definitions with the powers not to mention Spell-casting is also an ability that all Witches hold otherwise they would be called super-humans and not Witches at all lol. Please adjust.

Cedrik raised an eyebrow at the girl and seemed rather curious by her. "You seem so sure of yourself, but there is something so familiar about you I could never place my finger on it. I believe you know just where you stand and in a world of gray's that want to change there can only be black and white. You will make a choice. I see the fire in your eyes the same way I see the fire in my protege's eyes. She is what one might call a real firecracker. Perhaps, if you ever decide to choose us over the weaker people you might meet her. Whatever dark rest within you certainly doesn't hold back in her. I believe she is what has drawn me to you. Ira is a special girl and you seem so strangely familiar to her." Cedrik passed the bottle to her with a sly and conniving smirk. "Perhaps you would find more enjoyment in wandering alone until the next death or the next death...Do not think I damn you. Should someone rise greater than my god they will find themselves facing his armies. Even I can be overpowered by a number of great Witches, but that is why I seek to grow my lord's army. I am here to sacrifice every ounce of power and being to my god. My young protege is learning the ways of servitude, but she has a tendency to let things get out of hand, but much like yourself I admire her spirit."

Okay so Salem was fighting Hunters and Damien was present when it all occured. The Supreme Witch Andrew/Ash came to them and stated that Erin had died by such Erin gave her power up to Salem for whatever reason it may be.
I'm thinking Salem blames himself even having her power and as he attempted suicide to get away from the misery already and failed perhaps he tries to be like Damien and summon Erin back to life.

Artemus nodded, "Right then, fine. I must say you drive a hard bargain. I can distract Variel and I can get her out of the way to the point that Damien will know nothing. Can I make the suggestion of getting a few more enemies as you are so keen on sticking without new allies? There had to be more than one come in here and attack you. Why not attack one of them personally? Surely, they all have close families. Let's destroy one of those families." Artemus smirked offering his charming smile as he plotted in his head. Surely, one of the people who attacked Senka were parents or had extremely close loved ones. The town Sheriff certainly had to hit someone's soft spot.

@Fiend, we have one problem with you now having Erin available to us. Erin was killed off...However, given other circumstances I'm sure it can all work out. I can catch you up a bit more on her most recent history if you like.

Kellan was unsure if someone meant to attack him or if it was intended for Eli. No matter who the poison was intended for it got a target and that meant that Grievance Ridge clearly was not a safe place to be anymore. Kellan stayed close to Max who no matter the amount of blood loss or injuries seemed to be getting on fine compared to how a human would in the same condition. He looked at his brother Ian for only a moment.
Ian knew Ciara was right and there was nothing he could do to stop his brother from hanging around them and it was now all too late to turn around now. He turned seeing Max walk in with a wolf in her arms. He stood abruptly nearly knocking his chair over behind him. "What happened? Is that Eli?" He looked around at Kali now truly concerned at this point. Ian had no time now. He moved to the door quickly and pressed his hands against the glass door. He had no time for questions and answers. He closed his eyes and pushed out a pulse over the building so it seemed less enticing and pushed people away rather than pull them in. "I can't risk Hunters finding us. This is their doing...I am not about to let my brother become a part of that."
Unfortunately, Ian spoke rather soon. Apparently, the cannabis mistletoe held a tracking solution in it when the mistletoe triggered the Familiars transformation. It was only minutes that vehicles began to pull up outside. "Zayn! Lock all the doors and windows and turn out the lights." He told Kellan quickly. Kellan jumped into action running into the back and beginning to question if he should call the police. He hit the switches on the breaker box and the lights went dim but for the usual back light on the coffee bar. Kellan raced forward closing curtains and locking down everything. "What about Max? She is in no condition to fight somebody, what is going on, Ian?"
Ian didn't speak. He just simply stayed silent mentally preparing himself for what was about to occur and where he was best located for an advantage in a fight.

Kellan looked panicked as Eli stiffened like he was paralyzed or petrified and he began whimpering as his legs stretched his clothes rather uncomfortably over his wolf body. "What happened? What do you mean mistletoe? I swear it's just marijuana. Mistletoe is poisonous to people in large doses, right? Why am I not turning into something?" He looked around in fear. "What if someone sees...We need to get him inside and out of this alley. Someone is going to be back for their clothes." He stated nodding toward a pile of clothes covered in dust and sand. Kellan was unaware of the fact that the clothes once belonged to an innocent woman that had her life essence drained from her entirely until she crumbled.
((Post Ian later sorry))

Also in her history you state she Ascended later, this confuses me a bit as she was in the void for 8 years nearly 9. By that time she would have been twenty something and in that dimension I get that she was basically frozen in time and stuck at the age that she was placed into the void.
If you could further elaborate on how this all worked please due tell because in one part she is with the Horned God becoming a Wraith and in another she doesn't Ascend until she meets Cedrik.

Kaley:
Ira seems like a great character only one tiny issue. A Witch can only become a Wraith if the take the life of another Ascended Witch upon their own Ascension at the age of 18. It is this act of killing that marks them with blood on their hands for the rest of their lives. Killing before and after Ascension will not make one a Wraith. She was in the void for 8 years which started when she was around 15 which means she missed her Ascension and her chance to become a Wraith. She can be a dark Witch killing people and serving Lucifer, but she would have had to kill a Witch at the exact moment of her Ascension in order to become a Wraith.

sorry none of my notifications are coming in gang.

((Sorry didn't see it.))
Cedrik nodded in thanks to the bottle being handed to him. He watched noticing her notice him on a kinder level. Cedrik moved to face her as she positioned herself back on the counter. He raised his eyebrow as he studied her. Cedrik could not tell what was going on in her mind, but he felt that something in her he could certainly relate to. "So tell me when the fight begins who's side will you be on? You are a simple Witch not a Wraith, but darkness still holds strongly inside of you. You were a Wraith in a past life or two I am sure, but who will you stand loyal to when push comes to shove and everyone you know begins to die?"