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Dec 28, 2015 02:53PM

150761 Naomi turned around and looked at him and hugged him softly. "I love you." She whispered in his ear. She was trying to make him feel better or relax a little.
Dec 28, 2015 12:52PM

150761 "I know I'm sorry for being a wreck. I need to remember your brother is gone, but I promise we will find a way to get him back. You need me just as much as I need you." She whispered.
Dec 28, 2015 11:13AM

150761 Naomi pulled away. "You can leave. You broke your promise. You aren't treating me the same." She said. "I'm the same girl. I will always be the same girl. And right now you're hurting me so much." Tears stung in her eyes. "Why can't you be the same guy from five hours ago? The one who was holding me. I haven't changed I'm not different. What do i have to do to prove to you that?"
Dec 28, 2015 11:06AM

150761 "I didn't mean for this to happen." She whispered. "I don't think it will and you promised not to treat me differently." She said shakily.
Dec 28, 2015 10:58AM

150761 "I don't think it will." She whispered softly wincing. Naomi felt something stir inside her. "It's happening." Her voice quiet the rush of power taking her breath away.
Dec 28, 2015 10:54AM

150761 Bobby walked in. "Dean the eclipse is starting be careful." He said and left the room.

Naomi backed away from the wall. "Is this eclipse going to change us?" She asked softly waiting for him to begin.
Dec 28, 2015 10:48AM

150761 "Please answer my question then you can do whatever you want." Naomi said.
Dec 28, 2015 10:44AM

150761 Naomi looked at him. "I'm losing you aren't I?"
Dec 28, 2015 10:38AM

150761 Naomi started shaking. "I never refused your help. Right now I need my boyfriend. I'm terrified of everything. All I see and hear on repeat is what they did to me. And all you are doing is keeping your distant locking me up. Next thing i know I'm going to be chained to the bed." She wasn't in the right state of mind and with eclipse starting soon she was even more on edge because she could feel it.
Dec 28, 2015 10:25AM

150761 Tears came down her cheeks everything dropped. She glanced up to see the room a mess. "Dean I'm sorry." She repeated. "Please don't leave me alone."
Dec 28, 2015 10:06AM

150761 "Why wouldn't I? I freaked out because I heard a sound." She snapped. The lights started to flicker and stuff started to fly towards Dean .Naomi didn't even see what she was doing or what was happening around. "Dean I'm sorry for snapping at you." She whispered quietly.
Dec 28, 2015 10:00AM

150761 Naomi looked down quickly. Feeling worse than she already did. "You can leave I understand."
Dec 28, 2015 07:29AM

150761 Naomi looked down. "I'm not like you Dean you came out of the pit and you got on with your life. I saw what they did to you and it was horrible and you're not having a mental break down." She whispered pausing for second. "I'm probably going to have mental break downs and act certain ways. I can't help it and I'm sorry." Her eyes glanced up at him. "Right now it seems like we are so close, but so far away. You are treating me differently. Just because this whole dark thing is happening that doesn't mean I'm evil. Right now more and ever I really need you." Tears rolled down her cheeks.
Dec 27, 2015 06:23PM

150761 Naomi heard a noise getting closer. Tears streamed down her face. She quickly pulled away to go to the corner. She curled into a ball. She was still terrified and everything was fresh in her memory of what they did to her. "Please don't hurt me"

Bobby was coming down the stairs.
Dec 27, 2015 01:49AM

150761 "How do you think I'm different? " she asked. Naomi winced at the pain in her back. "Please don't hurt me." She begged as her mind drifted to what they did to her. It was easily seen that her mind was drifting away.
Dec 26, 2015 10:40PM

150761 Naomi heard him. "Am I different to you?"
Dec 26, 2015 10:36PM

150761 Naomi looked down she just told him what they did to her and he didn't say anything. Remembering his words how she wasn't the same girl he knew. She just nodded her head.
Dec 26, 2015 10:32PM

150761 Naomi looked at her leg. "They took a knife and stabbed my leg over and over again. Then they through me against the walls and started kicking me in the stomach. He told them to do this after he whipped me. I don't want to be alone."
Dec 26, 2015 10:25PM

150761 Naomi nodded and moved away from the wall. She didn't really want to talk about what they did to her.
Dec 26, 2015 10:21PM

150761 "You promised me that you would treat me the same when I said I had that feeling." She said softly. There was three deep cuts from the whip on her back. "Please look at my back it hurts really bad" If was going to go dark that doesn't mean she is evil?