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Jan 16, 2016 06:57AM

150761 Naomi winced some. "Dean I'm tired."

"Wyatt stay here." Bobby said.
Jan 15, 2016 10:42PM

150761 Naomi felt sleep go over her. "Dean can I sleep?" She whispered.


((No problem))
Jan 11, 2016 04:08PM

150761 ((She was I meant that she was comparing getting stabbed to being shot sorry for not making that clear.))
Jan 09, 2016 04:46PM

150761 Name:Naomi
Age: 18
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Personality:TBRP
History: TBRP
Jan 09, 2016 03:59PM

150761 ((Sorry for the late response))
Naomi had been stabbed and knocked around countless times. "Dean." She managed to say. She didn't want to die.
Jan 09, 2016 07:58AM

150761 Naomi was shaking. She got up off the ground. "Your not welcomed here."

The hunter smiled some taking an aim and fired at her. It Naomi in the stomach. "There she's dead." He said as she fell to the ground.

Naomi was struggling to breathe.
Jan 08, 2016 05:07AM

150761 Naomi looked at him and smiled softly he believed in her or maybe he believed her.

The hunter look at him. "Fine then I gave you your chance." He said with a cold smile. He pulled the trigger.

Naomi screamed closing her eyes tightly. "Please be okay." She whispered she didn't realize she stopped the bullet in mid-air. Falling to ground. "He has to be okay."
Jan 07, 2016 08:03PM

150761 "I think what he is trying to say is if you shoot him and my father. Or anyone else I will kill you." Naomi said. "No one hurts the people I care about " Maybe she should have kept quiet , but she didn't take this threat lightly.

"Hand her over. I knew you had a soft side for monsters, but really. She can't possibly care for you. Just hand her over now." He said pointing his gun at Dean. "We will make sure her death is quick."
Jan 07, 2016 07:34PM

150761 Naomi quickly pull away from his touch. "Please don't touch me." She whispered. "I'm serious Dean I could have really hurt you. I'm a danger to you and my sister. I...." A loud crash came it was the hunters who were looking for awhile back. She looked at Dean. To her hunting or fighting was Dean was fun because she felt like they really clicked together.

"Give us the orcale." The one hunter. "Winchester hand her over or I will shoot you and the old man. There's a price and I'm not letting anything take that away."
Jan 06, 2016 05:19AM

150761 Naomi didn't argue with him she was afraid of herself. "Please kill me. I'm a monster." She stayed far away from Dean because she didn't want to hurt him. She wasn't sure who was taking this harder him or her.
Jan 06, 2016 05:15AM

150761 Naomi looked at him and got out quickly looking down. She honestly felt that way. She didn't trust herself at all. "I can't be trusted."
Jan 05, 2016 03:50PM

150761 "You were going to kick me out. I could sense coming from you." Naomi said. "Please if you are going to kill me do it or I will I can't be trusted." She knew Dean wouldn't kill her.
Jan 05, 2016 03:43PM

150761 "I had my hands around your throat. I honestly don't know how my hands got there." She whispered. "I tried killing you. "
Jan 05, 2016 08:54AM

150761 "Please don't leave me alone. I won't make it this time." She whispered.
Jan 05, 2016 08:53AM

150761 "You don't have to do anything I will." She whispered softly looking at the knife. "I don't remember touching you. I don't remember." Naomi said shaikly.
Jan 05, 2016 08:49AM

150761 Naomi sneezed due to some dust giving away her hiding spot. "I don't remember touching him." She whispered to herself tears quickly came down her face.
Jan 05, 2016 08:46AM

150761 Naomi kept quiet hiding her tears. She looked down pulling out a knife. She hurt Dean the one who person who cared for her how could she live with herself.
Jan 05, 2016 08:42AM

150761 Naomi knew she lost Dean right then and there. She didn't even remember putting her hands around him. How did that happen? Why didn't she remember? She definitely didn't want to remember. Dean was going to kick her out and she would be alone and with everything going on that was the last thing she wanted.
Jan 04, 2016 06:21PM

150761 "Neither of you guys love me." Naomi said the next thing she did was walked over to Dean. She put her hands around his throat. "I......" she quickly let go shaking. Tears quickly came to her face and she ran out the door to Dean's car knowing she messed up this time. She didn't even remember it getting to that point. The car smelt like Dean as it calmed her down it made her cry even more.
Jan 04, 2016 05:39PM

150761 "Talk about how I'm no longer the same person and how I'm going to do horrible things or how I you are an awful person. I'm up for either." Naomi said softly. "Its the truth Dean if I wanted to hurt you guys I would have."