Carrlene Ray’s Comments (group member since Mar 14, 2021)

Carrlene Ray’s comments from the WORD NERDS group.

This is a really fun game, basically someone will say a book that starts with the letter “A” such as Anne of Green Gables and the next person would say a book that started with the letter “B” and we’ll continue down the rest of the alphabet. If there’s a book you’ve read or a book on your tbr that starts with that letter, use it, if not, you’re welcome to pick another book that you know of :) the only rule is that you can’t list two in a row and that you follow the alphabetical order. Have fun!

Salad

Pecan?

Sandwich.

Taffy

The invigorating power surged through her, she felt it course through her bloodstream and fill every part of her body.

And now, she needed it more than ever, it was time her father got what he deserved.

The stream would have seemed ordinary to anyone else, but she knew the secret about the power the water held

The forest was her secret, all her life, the place to escape her father and escape the noise

That’s what she needed in life, peace and quiet, though the way things had been going lately. she was beginning to think that was impossible.

ANYONE BUT ME. I just think I would obsess over my future and it would mess with my head.

Hmm both those options sound terrible 😂 I do agree the shark would probably be quicker.

Would you rather live in the past or the future?

She wished there was a gray sky and pouring rain to fit the mood, but the stubborn sun was smiling through the trees and the sky behind it was an annoyingly cloudless blue.

Yeah, I don’t really have a favorite singer, so I’d have to go with author

She spat the thought out as soon as it came in, he deserved every bit of the hurt she’d seen in his eyes, if it was even real.

She meant the words with all her heart and if that was true, she shouldn’t be crying—why was she crying?

Author

Yay! Congratulations and welcome back :)

Harvest, do whatever you need! Good luck on your test, and we can’t wait to see you back :)

And it’s not that my old idea is bad, I just think the new one could be better. It would require changing the position of my mc and a side character but that side character lacks his depth if that happens

Thank you so much!! I seriously appreciate the help. I’m going to call one of my friends and talk it through as well as list the pros and cons and outline the original thing. Thanks for everyone’s help!!

Those are really good ideas. I think I’m going to try outlining it the way I had it tonight, and if I feel like I need more, I’ll change it. Thank you all for your help <3