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Also, not that they have not been active in this group, they have not been active on goodreads in anyway. Everyone else in our gathering has at least come on within the last few months to check their profile if not more. ML and Iiavali have been missing in action so I temporarily removed their moderator title so that the group does not appear to be stagnant. If you have interests in becoming a moderator just let Tomas or myself know. We are both fairly active and wouldn't mind the extra set of eyes.

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How's everyone else doing? Working on anything?

I was finally able to end my book on chapter 24.

Now its time to rewrite my story. Time to act as though I knew what I was doing all along. I'm hoping to have this beta ready by Christmas. Possibly published early next year.


Hearing the unfamiliar names would have concerned me especially since I was not aware that he set the tone of the book to be based off of Venice. However, the narrator provided a rich accent and once I realized this was influenced by the Italian culture I was able to sit back and enjoy the book.
At first the swearing was off putting but knowing that swearing is common vernacular in communities of poverty. This then made me feel as though it were a bit more authentic.
Overall I like movies like Oceans 11. This to me felt similar in how the plot unraveled. I also didn't care for the flashbacks but because of them the predictability of the book caught me multiple times. I do feel that if I had read it, it might not have been as interesting with me trying to focus on sounding out unfamiliar words, places and names.




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