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Hey Phoenix! No, we don't mind at all!
*awkward silence*Anyhoo, whatcha guys doing?
Ok, I changed a few things in the chapter, but they're on the actual writing thingy. I'm gonna delete the one I posted here, just because I'm too lazy to fix them again... XD
Mhm... Definitely. My mistake, it's 11, not 11.
Oh, it's definitely 11. No doubt about it, 11 is obviously the answer.
Ohhh, ok. Haha! Yeah, I guess that's sorta what I'm going for?
Aw, thanks! Sort of? I honestly don’t know. XD But it’s more of a 3rd person limited omniscient [[no idea if that’s even a thing]]. The reader only knows what Azeria is thinking and what she’s experiencing. Like, Ch.2 is about Lykos, but it will pick up from where we left off with Azeria. It won’t tell what happened to Lykos and such. During that chapter, I’ll get Lykos’s thoughts only, and then pick up with Azeria again for the third chapter.
Wow... That was a suuuper long explanation and I don’t think it even relates to what you said... Oops! XD
Um... Ok...? XD *disappears in a puff of smoke*
Oh really? I thought it sounded super bad...?Hm... Ok, so it’s sorta out of her POV, but also in it. Like, Ch.1 will focus on Azeria while staying in 3rd person, and then Ch.2 will focus on Lykos, similarly in 3rd person. Does that make any sense? And does that even address your... uh... thing? [[I seriously could not think of a better word... XD]]
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Heyo!
✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝ wrote: "it's definitely different and unique"Is that a bad thing???
Ok, I posted it as a writing thing, so there’s a link on the first comment.
Um... Thanks? I think? XD Is there anything in there that seems out of place/too cliche? Anything that needs fixing?
Well, how does it sound? Cheesy? Terrible? Cliche? Stupid? Don’t sugarcoat it, I want your honest answer.
bella --when the person you would take a bullet for... is behind the gun-- wrote: "i got zero idea if i'm part of this friend group....but here i am :)"Yes you are! Everyone is welcome and we’re really glad to have you here!
