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Ok, so are you planning on having short chapters throughout the book? I know some awesome books like that, and also others whose chapters are long. It depends on what theme you’re going for. If you want the telling to be more of a flowing story, it might be good to make it one chapter. If you want there to be a pause after the first chapter, then it’d be good as two separate ones. Does that make any sense? Sorry, my brain isn’t really functioning correctly either right now... XD -M
Ryan wrote: "Actually, I just realized something... Should I make the first chapter into the prologue while turning the second and third chapters into the first chapter or just leave it as it is? :) (I'm stil..."
Hm... It depends. The first chapter would probably make a good prologue, but I haven’t checked the next two chapters yet... Gimme a sec... -M
✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝ wrote: "Welp, i just spelled THE wrong too... I'm so freaking depressed at my spelling now"XD Don’t worry, I can’t for the life of me spell ‘our’ in one try. Even that took me multiple tries because I keep pressing the T instead... XD -O
@Ryan Unfortunately, no. Our teacher doesn’t allow either test corrections or retakes... :( But it’s ok, I’ll eventually work it back up! -O
✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝ wrote: "I was talking about teh fact that she noticed i spelled water wrong"XD Actually, Megan pointed that out, I was just the one who told you... -O
Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "XD Guys, that was Via. She even wrote the ‘O’ after. XDUm... Why in the world are we having a trial...? XD -M"
Yep, I'm surprised they argued abo..."
XD -O
Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "Oh my gosh, I think that was the hardest math test I have ever taken... Ok, maybe not, but it was HARD! DX -O"But you did it right? :D Hopefully y..."
Yeah, 80% is fine, but it will still drop my math grade a bit. -O
✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝ wrote: "I TOLD YOU IT WAS VIA!!!! Via i know you so well LOLPlus, you're grammer's better than mine"
Haha! Well Meg’s grammar is better than mine, so it definitely could’ve been either of us -O
Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "XD Guys, that was Via. She even wrote the ‘O’ after. XDUm... Why in the world are we having a trial...? XD -M"
Yep, I'm surprised they argued about it. XD
Well, Olivia didn't..."
Yeah, um... The O and the M are a few keys apart on the keyboard. Pretty sure we won’t be totally mis-click on on our label... XD
Seriously? XD -M
Ryan wrote: "ᎢᎻⵇ ߓⵀⴴⵇᎦ wrote: "Oh my gosh, I think that was the hardest math test I have ever taken... Ok, maybe not, but it was HARD! DX -O"But you did it right? :D Hopefully you got a very good grade for yo..."
Uh... Pretty sure the highest grade I’ll get is an 80%... -O
XD Guys, that was Via. She even wrote the ‘O’ after. XDUm... Why in the world are we having a trial...? XD -M
Oh my gosh, I think that was the hardest math test I have ever taken... Ok, maybe not, but it was HARD! DX -O
Sunny wrote: "I came here to make a quick announcement:I SOLVED IT I SOLVED IT I SOLVED IT!!! HAHAHA!!! *VICTORY DANCE*
E44?! 9 R9R 96!!! (34pp... 06u4d 6uwj (Q) wjr (Z), 9 fwj'6 t9jr 6u4k...)"
Congratulations! [[Sorry, I’m a bit too lazy at the moment to decipher that... I’ll do it later when my brain is working...]]
