J.A.’s answer to “I read your story in F&SF -- and was very "taken" with it. But, since you described how Faine actu…” > Likes and Comments

Perhaps, I would have understood this better if you could have mentioned more clearly that Lark was moved by the experience of being able to touch Faine in such a positive manner. When you first described Lark touching Faine, it was not obvious to me that she was so moved...