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Yup. And Mrs. Robinson actually made me giddy because Ana hated her. GRINNN.
Hahaha! I wanted E.L. to have given Mrs. Robinson more spunk than what she had. It would have made the book more interesting. If given the chance, Mrs. Robinson would have mopped the floor with Ana. But I saw E.L.'s dilemma, being I'm an author. She needed the readers to hate Mrs. Robinson, so she painted her in harsh light. That's commercial fiction for you. But come on, wouldn't it have made a better read if Ana and Mrs. Robinson faced off? And here's another question. What about Ana irritated you the most? :-)
AN ANA AND MRS. ROBINSON RUMBLE WOULD HAVE BEEN STELLAR.
Mrs. ROBINSON definately needed some kick and a fight would have been hilarious.
And the Ana question? Hmm. Probably her stupidity, of maybe just her unbelievable innocence. "Down there"...Really, E.L. James? And the way she barely thinks about the BDSM contract? It drove me nuts.
So in short, her stupidity.
"He's so freaking' hot" >: (
(Or her unbelievable innocence) Stupid Kindle typos.
You have me laughing so hard. I'd forgotten about the 'down there' comment. Hilarious! Okay, I have to add one more. If Christian would have said one more time, "Cum for me, Ana!" I would have tossed my book across the room. There was much repetition in this book, which also annoyed me. And trust me, the Kindle typos were also in the printed books. Mine books had plenty, which caused me to believe that E.L. was an indie author. But I saw an interview where she actually gets offended by this assumption. You and I should write out own take of this blockbuster! I'm still no hater, though. I bought all three books because horribly written or not, there was something different E.L. James captured that many couldn't ignore.
Wow, so many typos in that previous post. Where's my editor?!? Jerry come save me before I embarrass myself further.
Write our own Fifty Shades...(evil laugh) Yes...
Chapter one: Idiots
"After blushing, moaning, and groaning my way through the apartment, I tripped over a doorjamb and landed in the pool of lava Christian kept under his building to get rid of submissives that actually had spines and could say "Uh, HEEEL NAW" To his craziness. It was okay because after I said "Oh my!" For the millionth time I saw Christian lounging sexily on the charred body of an ex-sub. His eyes darkened and my muscles liquefied 'cause I don't own bones and we fucked(hard) on the dead body. I had eighty orgasms.
Whadda ya think?
OMG, you have me laughing so hard!!! Do you write? I would love to read something you wrote. I actually have a book that delves slightly into BDSM, but instead of my female character learning the role of a sub, she's actually fallen for an ex-dom who wants nothing further to do with the lifestyle. Shall we say he came to his senses?? Anyhow, Dr. Tell is his name and the book is titled Plain Dealing. Do you honestly want to know a part of the reason I wrote this book? Because I wanted to present the lifestyle as it TRULY is and not the fluff that James wrote about. My fans actually love this book even though it's not a part of my Dreshaj series. They are even asking for a second book with Dr. Tell, and I think I will definitely give them this after I fulfill my current obligations. If you are a writer, what genre do you write? I'm an avid reader and read just about anything. :-)
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Yup. And Mrs. Robinson actually made me giddy because Ana hated her. GRINNN.
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Hahaha! I wanted E.L. to have given Mrs. Robinson more spunk than what she had. It would have made the book more interesting. If given the chance, Mrs. Robinson would have mopped the floor with Ana. But I saw E.L.'s dilemma, being I'm an author. She needed the readers to hate Mrs. Robinson, so she painted her in harsh light. That's commercial fiction for you. But come on, wouldn't it have made a better read if Ana and Mrs. Robinson faced off? And here's another question. What about Ana irritated you the most? :-)
AN ANA AND MRS. ROBINSON RUMBLE WOULD HAVE BEEN STELLAR.Mrs. ROBINSON definately needed some kick and a fight would have been hilarious.
And the Ana question? Hmm. Probably her stupidity, of maybe just her unbelievable innocence. "Down there"...Really, E.L. James? And the way she barely thinks about the BDSM contract? It drove me nuts.
So in short, her stupidity.
"He's so freaking' hot" >: (
(Or her unbelievable innocence) Stupid Kindle typos.
You have me laughing so hard. I'd forgotten about the 'down there' comment. Hilarious! Okay, I have to add one more. If Christian would have said one more time, "Cum for me, Ana!" I would have tossed my book across the room. There was much repetition in this book, which also annoyed me. And trust me, the Kindle typos were also in the printed books. Mine books had plenty, which caused me to believe that E.L. was an indie author. But I saw an interview where she actually gets offended by this assumption. You and I should write out own take of this blockbuster! I'm still no hater, though. I bought all three books because horribly written or not, there was something different E.L. James captured that many couldn't ignore.
Wow, so many typos in that previous post. Where's my editor?!? Jerry come save me before I embarrass myself further.
Write our own Fifty Shades...(evil laugh) Yes...Chapter one: Idiots
"After blushing, moaning, and groaning my way through the apartment, I tripped over a doorjamb and landed in the pool of lava Christian kept under his building to get rid of submissives that actually had spines and could say "Uh, HEEEL NAW" To his craziness. It was okay because after I said "Oh my!" For the millionth time I saw Christian lounging sexily on the charred body of an ex-sub. His eyes darkened and my muscles liquefied 'cause I don't own bones and we fucked(hard) on the dead body. I had eighty orgasms.
Whadda ya think?
OMG, you have me laughing so hard!!! Do you write? I would love to read something you wrote. I actually have a book that delves slightly into BDSM, but instead of my female character learning the role of a sub, she's actually fallen for an ex-dom who wants nothing further to do with the lifestyle. Shall we say he came to his senses?? Anyhow, Dr. Tell is his name and the book is titled Plain Dealing. Do you honestly want to know a part of the reason I wrote this book? Because I wanted to present the lifestyle as it TRULY is and not the fluff that James wrote about. My fans actually love this book even though it's not a part of my Dreshaj series. They are even asking for a second book with Dr. Tell, and I think I will definitely give them this after I fulfill my current obligations. If you are a writer, what genre do you write? I'm an avid reader and read just about anything. :-)
