The Chronicle of Heloise and Grimple – A Serial Adventure (Part 5)

For those who dig fun, rollicking fantasy adventures, we hereby present Part 5 of The Chronicle of Heloise and Grimple (for more background on the series and to read Part 1: All’s Well That Begins Well, click here). Periodically throughout the series, you, Dear Readers, will be presented with decision points at the end of installments, and it is YOUR collective feedback that will help determine the path our heroes take. So pay attention and choose (un)wisely—the next such decision point comes at the end of this portion of our tale...weigh in with your votes in the comment section below by February 24!

Be Careful What You Wish For (Handy Advice)

AWait...where did all the content go?! You'll have to check out the collected Chronicle of Heloise & Grimple for the full story...coming in late September! Watch this space.
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Published on February 17, 2016 09:29 Tags: fantasy-adventure, heloise-and-grimple, serial-story
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message 101: by Aileene (new)

Aileene But our Sean here would play hard to get...I just know it. He won't add even a tiniest carving detail to that banger.
But, we'll wait and see. He might give in (which I really doubt)


message 102: by Trish (last edited Apr 05, 2016 12:53AM) (new)

Trish *lol* Well, since we still pester him about those glorious red boots, he HAS to play hard to get. Otherwise the namecalling would ensue! Muhahahaha.

But if he really is adamant, why not write fanfiction about it?!


message 103: by Aileene (new)

Aileene Yes! What's happened to those red boots?! Still a no-show, eh?
>:(
With all these talkings, I'm sure his ears are burning!

Fan fiction? I leave that to Jess J-Rex, that's her forte :)


message 104: by Paul (new)

Paul "Then he realised that there was a pair of stockings red boots on a chair. He got up stealthily, and put them on himself. Then he sat still, and knew he would have to have her. After that he sat erect on the bed..."


message 105: by Trish (new)

Trish Aileene wrote: "Yes! What's happened to those red boots?! Still a no-show, eh?
>:(
With all these talkings, I'm sure his ears are burning!

Fan fiction? I leave that to Jess J-Rex, that's her forte :)"


He DID write about the boots. You need to catch up! ;)


message 106: by Trish (new)

Trish Paul wrote: ""Then he realised that there was a pair of stockings red boots on a chair. He got up stealthily, and put them on himself. Then he sat still, and knew he would have to have her. After that he sat er..."

Eehhmm, wrong story?!


message 107: by Paul (new)

Paul Look, misquoting DH Lawrence is as close as I get to smutty fanfiction, so make the most of it...


message 108: by Trish (new)

Trish *lol* I thought you were trying to quote the passage from H&G! xD


message 109: by Aileene (new)

Aileene Trish wrote: "Aileene wrote: "Yes! What's happened to those red boots?! Still a no-show, eh?
>:(
With all these talkings, I'm sure his ears are burning!

Fan fiction? I leave that to Jess J-Rex, that's her fort..."


Oh he did?! I better catch up then,


message 110: by Sean (new)

Sean Gibson Paul wrote: "Look, misquoting DH Lawrence is as close as I get to smutty fanfiction, so make the most of it..."

There goes Paul, trying to class this place up again...


message 111: by Trish (new)

Trish Sean wrote: "Paul wrote: "Look, misquoting DH Lawrence is as close as I get to smutty fanfiction, so make the most of it..."

There goes Paul, trying to class this place up again..."


It's far too late for that. He should have known better. ;P


message 112: by Paul (new)

Paul Alas, I fear my efforts are all for nought... Also on this thread.


message 113: by Sean (new)

Sean Gibson Paul wrote: "Alas, I fear my efforts are all for nought... Also on this thread."

We'll call them ineffectual but appreciated.

If it's any consolation, that's pretty much my M.O.


message 114: by Trish (new)

Trish Are you two in a contest now?! Do you want pity or cuddles or what?! xD


message 115: by Sean (new)

Sean Gibson Trish wrote: "Are you two in a contest now?! Do you want pity or cuddles or what?! xD"

I'd take a cuddle from Paul.


message 116: by Trish (new)

Trish Sean wrote: "Trish wrote: "Are you two in a contest now?! Do you want pity or cuddles or what?! xD"

I'd take a cuddle from Paul."



Nobody wants to cuddle with me!

Revenge will be MINE! *evil grin*


message 117: by Sean (new)

Sean Gibson Trish wrote: "Sean wrote: "Trish wrote: "Are you two in a contest now?! Do you want pity or cuddles or what?! xD"

I'd take a cuddle from Paul."


Nobody wants to cuddle with me!

Revenge will be MINE! *evil grin*"


Ha! To be fair, I'd really only cuddle Paul because I think I could talk him into running a D&D session for me whilst doing so.

If you can do the same, Trish, the cuddles are all yours! ;)


message 118: by Trish (last edited Apr 05, 2016 08:26AM) (new)

Trish Sean wrote: "Trish wrote: "Sean wrote: "Trish wrote: "Are you two in a contest now?! Do you want pity or cuddles or what?! xD"

I'd take a cuddle from Paul."


Nobody wants to cuddle with me!

Revenge will be M..."


D&D?! That sounds nasty. Let me do some research first ... oh you mean Dungeons and Dragons! Pfff! Child's play! But if this is all you're willing to give cuddles for then I'm not in the mood for it anymore. Your loss!


message 119: by Paul (new)

Paul I'll cuddle anyone. I'm good at it too.


message 120: by Trish (new)

Trish Paul wrote: "I'll cuddle anyone. I'm good at it too."

@Sean: *sticks tongue out to Sean*


@Paul: I'll take one round of cuddles please!
And I'll pay with Bigoli alla Bolognese (in hopes that you like pasta).



message 121: by Sean (new)

Sean Gibson NO ONE TOLD ME THERE WOULD BE PASTA!

I'm in! Cuddle me cuddle me!


message 122: by Paul (new)

Paul 'In hopes that I like pasta...' HA! I like pasta in the same way Lou Reed liked heroin!


message 123: by Trish (new)

Trish Sean wrote: "NO ONE TOLD ME THERE WOULD BE PASTA!

I'm in! Cuddle me cuddle me!"


Forget it, compadre. You had your chance, you didn't want me.



message 124: by Trish (new)

Trish Paul wrote: "'In hopes that I like pasta...' HA! I like pasta in the same way Lou Reed liked heroin!"

I have no idea who that Reed guy is but I take that as a yes. Pillow is ready, dinner will be in about 1 hour.


message 125: by Paul (new)

Paul Trish wrote: "I have no idea who that Reed guy is..."

>sobs quietly into pillow<


message 126: by Trish (new)

Trish Paul wrote: "Trish wrote: "I have no idea who that Reed guy is..."

>sobs quietly into pillow<"


xD
You can tell me all about this surely fascinating character during dinner.


Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin Mini evil little guts... lol

I want this on my kindle!


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