Deathly Dreams by The Panther (available at Wattpad.com)

     Deathly Dreams, by The Panther is a unique YA tale of Jason Anderson.  While visiting camp, he's chosen to be leader over a domineering co-camper, which creates a bit of unknown tension.  While on a hiking expedition, at the top of a place called Echo's Peak, Jason is pushed off a cliff, his attacker falling to her death.  And then the dreams begin.

     I like Wattled.  It's an app available for both Apple and Android devices.  An author, both seasoned and green can use the app to write, or online publish.  That's where Deathly Dreams by Panther is available.

     I found this story very interesting.  This is the author's first serious writing and seems to be pretty popular so I gave him a read.  

     First I have to say, I was sorta bummed when I found out there were no aliens!  When I saw this cover, I thought, "Oh yeah- abduction!"  NOT!  I can't say enough how a cover must give you a little something bout your tale, or it's a bit deceiving.  But it's okay, that can always be changed.

​     The story was very original and I appreciated the dream sequences.  They're always cool to me.  What I found difficult was the progression.  Sometimes as writers, we see so much going on in our heads that we don't transition them well when our fingers do the typing.  I was a bit lost on how fast things happened and even the part where Gabriel was possessed happened so suddenly, I didn't have time to even figure out what happened to him. Those types of plot holes can confuse a reader.  The best thing is, The Panter has time to work on these.        All in all, I enjoyed the tale.  I think The Panther will hone in on his skills and become a great storyteller.  I look forward to reading more by him in the future.  He's still working on the story, so even though he asked me to read it, I feel I've robbed him of a another spec, should he get it all edited and reworked.  

     He's working on it though and that's a good thing.  Good luck to this budding author and I'm off to the next book!