Ham Acting one of my Characters

I recently discovered YouTube and created a 17 second video (In preparation for a trailer)
Decided to do a kind of prequel for one of the female leads in my series Children of Stone: Ariennu of Tyre - In this scene the one-time camp follower & thief (now near death from a host of diseases due to drunkeness & debauchery) has just seen the hero Marai lay waste to her encampment via what appears to be magic. She thinks she called up a god because her former BF slighted her. COMMENTS PLEASE.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p-RIW...