Review request

My name is Byron Fortin, and I am the author behind the World Beyond Scripture fantasy series. My first entries, Through the Psyche of Ambrosia Parts I & II, are in need of review and I would greatly appreciate the support of anyone out there who is willing to take them on. The story has been broken into two books to correlate with that of its characters/ongoing themes playing out. This is something which will continue moving forward, as it has already been implemented with the next entry in the series. The genre that best describes these novels in perhaps urban fantasy/paranormal romance. Please note that book I begins on chapter 3. Chapters 1 & 2 are missing for a reason that will be later revealed as the series continues. 
Below I have included a brief synopsis, author information and links to the amazon kdp store. I have also sent along .mobi attachments with this email that should work well enough for Kindle, but I also have additional formats (.epub, .pdf, etc.) which can be submitted upon request should you decide that this is something you would be interested in. Lastly, I've included a small excerpt here in hopes to entice you towards taking on this project. Please let me know of any further questions you may have or if there is anything else you need. Happy reading! Author Name(s): Byron Fortin

Book Title: Through the Psyche of Ambrosia: Part I A Nexus of Numen (Worlds Beyond Scripture Book 1)[image error]
Link:  http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B009UH01KI?*Version*=1&*entries*=0

Pages: 206

ISBN/ASIN: B009UH01KI

Genre Category: Fiction - Fantasy - Urban

Book Description:
Meet Ambrosia as he is invited by a wealthy philanthropist to leave behind his life of general obscurity, safely sheltered from society, to enter a world of intriguing characters in the big city of Hartland. He’s not ready for what lies ahead though, and this adventure is just beginning to heat up…. He will soon meet a set of twins, throwing him into a love triangle he cannot possibly understand. But if he only knew what was to come, he may have never stepped onto that plane. He becomes terrorized in a dream so seemingly real his mind cannot seem to let go of it, and is plagued by disturbing images of infatuation from another time. Afraid he is spiraling into madness, Ambrosia seeks out the help of those around him. Yet he has no idea what he is about to uncover. There may be more mystery and magic in his new home than he ever cares to admit.
Book Title: Through the Psyche of Ambrosia: Part II A Swain's Affray (Worlds Beyond Scripture Book 2) [image error]
Link: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B017DYMH2O?*Version*=1&*entries*=0Pages: 310ISBN/ASIN: B017DYMH2O

Genre Category: Fiction - Fantasy - Urban

Book Description:Journey with Ambrosia through an evening of fantastical ravishments as the residents of The Nebula celebrate their most sacred of days, Samhain, in this second installment of the Worlds Beyond Scripture series. Can the seductive Regina solve the riddle of the mystifying written words that haunt Ambrosia and echo through his soul, or will the night of thinnest veil propel him further down the spiral of madness to a complete breakdown of his reality? The runes foretell a choice to be made… Will it be his Star shine, or Summer love that wins out these passions to completely hold his heart in her hands? Or might that heart fall into the grip of yet another, more mysterious maiden that may not be so gentle? 
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Excerpt: There in the garden I stand amongst the trees and the flowers. Bare back as laid out upon the grassy knoll she awaits there for me now. Atop a bed of lotus blossoms, within a wall of roses and violets held she waits. A light breeze settles in against the angle of my naked continuity, and I am whole as one inside.
So she rolls her body round, like some delicate feather blown on the wind, to conceal the gentle back contour and reveal a frontal nudity that would make beauty itself ache with the need, thick within the throes of jealously for having to so unwillingly surrender over the crown.
It is in there that you find paradise, and it seems she too knows me by name of a gaze gaping, and notwithstanding but a single care towards the awareness of my steady on-looking fixation. It is the stare sewing in the seeds of an awestruck wonder for what the mystics deemed necessary, and the melody of majesty aligned in plenary ordinance; a precious passing moment of collective cornucopia & blessed union of soul where all planetary constellation come together to marvel around the bringing of such a fair existence about.
And what combination was that of the raw material splendour used to create this mould casting gone asunder beyond its one successful flight attempt to seize hold the sky and bottle it, never to be used again? Beholding it is to clasp the all consuming essence of longing in your pass, to wield command over the power of the cosmos with the skilled hands of lovers’ chaste holding. It is that which instills a life, a capture of Elysia off the edge of insanity refined, and that’s brilliance bled out by any design.
For only by taking nature in kind and boiling her down to her purest, basic, most sincere level will you be able to build her up, and by a metamorphosis see her change, transform into something off the wings of a butterfly; sign of the worthwhile creature and form of the eternal everlasting entity. To spring forth out the sublime incarnation, a shine of glory set down for all the world to see. She is pure blissful serenity.
Plant a seed to watch it grow; nurture it and it will give rise to a field of flowers full. Still none of any other would have compared as saccharine as when I first laid eyes upon the woman found stirring within the perfumed tendrils of Summer’s bloom, beneath the Stars shinning bright. Her beauty is so that I come alive. Consumed by loveliness I am completely at the lady’s mercy, and unable to turn a look away. That is to say, I would not want to.
Regards, Byron Fortinjbboyd01@gmail.comhttp://www.byronfortin.com/ https://www.facebook.com/byronfortinauthor
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Published on November 18, 2015 18:46
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