The Vampire and the Necromancer

I finally got book 2 finished, and I'm really proud of it, but I would like to say that It's out of sequence. I think this makes the story fun and unique, but I'm aware that it's completely crazy. It may not be for everyone. I posted the first two chaters for preview, and welcome honest feedback. I'm tough. You can tell me if it's completely bananas. Book 1 focused on Brennan/ Sani/ Lamar. Book 2 follows Ivan and Nova. I love Nova the most out of all my characters because she's nerdy.