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The author of the query for the Mother Nature book would like our opinion on which opening is more effective:



Sixteen-year old Theia Bryar has no idea she is the daughter of Mother Nature. She has never understood why the sun has always shone when she’s happy, while thunder answers her cries of anger. Or why plants grow unnaturally fast with her touch. But when she is abducted and taken to an island inhabited by the Naturae, people who can control earth, air, fire or water, she finally learns the truth. As the only blood relative of Mother Nature, Theia has power over all four elements.

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Sixteen-year old Theia Bryar believes she is being abducted. She is actually being taken home. On an island inhabited by the Naturae, people who can control earth, air, fire or water, Theia learns why the sun has always shone when she’s happy, while thunder answers her cries of anger. She is the daughter of Mother Nature, and has power over all four elements.