Thoughts on Writing – Sweating the Small Stuff

At the latestwriter’s club meeting that my husband and I attended, I read a scene from TheMultiverse Chroniclesto see if I had cleared up a few problem spots we’d found whenI read the scene at the previous meeting.

Overall, the description seemed to be taken care of, which opened up the ability to notice other little details that were out of place.

For example, in this particularscene, the main character, Trish is meetingwith variousmembers of the Britannian army. The story doesn’t revolve to...