Revising Pebble

For the first time in quite a while, I went back to reread some of A Pebble Tossed yesterday. You'll never guess what I learned.   I learned that I've gotten better since I wrote it!   This is both heartening and discouraging. Heartening, because it means that all the hard work I've been putting in to improve my craft is paying off. Discouraging, because it means I have a lot of work to do to get Pebble up to snuff.   I remember when I published Pebble, I thought it was the absolute best it