Thoughts on Writing – Transitions and Adding Emotion to a Scene

Every couple of weeks, my husband and I meet with thelocal writing critique group. While there, everyone shares relevant announcements, and we usually critique a small section of each other’s work.

Last week I brought in an episode of The Multiverse Chronicles. My husband plots and writes the first draft, which Ithen polish. Most of the other episodes haven’t been tooproblematic, but this particular episode was giving me issues. I’d already tried editing it a few different times, but it still...