Link Of The Week- How Can I Say That Better?

I’ve been stuck on one scene for the last two days. It feels stilted and doesn’t convey the emotion or flow that I like my writing to have on the page. Here’s a site that is meant for students in school, but has wonderful applications for writers who swim with words daily. Check it out and see if you can find a better way to say it!

 

 

http://www.teachthought.com/literacy-2/600-other-ways-to-say-common-things-improving-student-vocabulary/