Hot Tip for Writers: Easy Way to Add Character Traits

 


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I was halfway through writing my new novel, Key Largo Blues, when I realized that Jessie, the 24-year-old granddaughter of Frieda, didn’t have any flaws. I had to find some quick, and that’s how I discovered a fantastic tool for writers.


If you check out the TOC of the Negative Trait Thesaurus, you’ll see there’s a long list of traits your characters might have. I went down the list thinking “Nope. Nope. Yes. Maybe. No,” until I had a half dozen possible traits Jessie might possess. I also noted the page numbers where the individual traits were explained / expanded upon.


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Table of Contents for The Negative Trait Thesaurus


Then I went to the chapter that more fully described each trait, reading about them in detail. For example, here are the two pages relative to the trait “Flaky.” (Sorry they aren’t clearer. I couldn’t reproduce the pages very well here, but that’s no reflection on the book, which is very nicely done.)


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I thought of Jessie being naive but gifted, so some of the “Possible Causes” fit right in with her personality.


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More interesting information about a flaky person.


I decided flaky wasn’t exactly right for Jessie, but did select gullible, know-it-all, and melodramatic (hey, she’s 24). Now Jessie is a more well-rounded, if flawed character, and I didn’t have to spend all day trying to think of different characteristics. Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi did it for me.


They also published a couple of sister books, The Positive Trait Thesaurus, and The Emotion Thesaurus. I bought all three, because I’ll welcome any help I can get, and I recommend them to any writer who’s serious about getting something done in this lifetime.


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Published on July 31, 2015 01:45
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message 1: by Sandra (new)

Sandra Nachlinger All three of these books sound like they'd be helpful. Thanks for the heads up!


message 2: by Lynne (new)

Lynne Spreen My pleasure! Good writing, my friend.


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