Becoming Bimbo II

Well, I seem to have mustered up the strength to finish the story - at least it seems that way. There is still a little ways to go, but it is mostly written. All I need is to get it to a logical place to close, add the horrifying ending and get it edited.

Of course, the editing process sucks. I will find all my errors and where my phrasing sucks - not in the good way - and have to fix it.

As a warning, I this story is probably more difficult to read than the first. There is a lot of...psychological inner torture. At least I think there is. Not quite as much sex as before, and what there is is sort of repetitive. The story sort of demanded it. Nonetheless, for body-mod fans there should be at least enough to make you cringe.

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Published on July 25, 2015 17:32
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