Dragons of Wellsdeep – pages 10 & 11 edit

The drafts on toparethe original manuscript pagesas it has been written. On the bottom aremy edit drafts with my handwritten comments.

When the writer gets confused about what’s going on, it’s not a good sign. I did have to ask myself why I had Moonhunter waste time reaching over the seat for Balthier unless he was checking to see if he was okay or maybe to hoist him back into the seat. You’ll notice that a lot of times I do ask myself questions when I’m editing and that’s to help spur...