THE FIRST LINES…

Let’s talk firsts….the first line of a book is supposed to draw you in, make you want to read…make you not want to put the book down…let’s take a look at my first lines…
DRIVEN: I sigh into the welcoming silence, grateful for the chance to escape—even if only momentarily—from the mindsuck of meaningless conversations on the other side of the door.
FUELED: Fucking dreams. Jumbled pieces of time that tumble through my subconscious. Rylee’s here. Filling them. Consuming them. 
CRASHED: Thwack. Thwack. Thwack.
RACED: What. The. Fuck?
UnRAVELED: I wish that I’d never looked up.
SLOW BURN: My sensations are dulled by the alcohol.
SWEET ACHE: “If you really want someone to manhandle your ass, I’m sure I could arrange for it to happen discreetly for you.”
HARD BEAT:  “Are you on a suicide mission, now?”
SECRET PROJECT:  Doctors say your heart can stop beating anywhere from four to six minutes – that’s two hundred forty to three hundred sixty seconds – before you die. They’re wrong.
10 YEAR GAP: ha. Nice try. I’m not sharing anything yet.
Which is your favorite first line of a book? I can’t wait to share many more of them with you…
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Published on June 23, 2015 15:00
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message 1: by Winniedp (new)

Winniedp Secret Project? I didn't know that you have this book. I'm looking for it and not find it... Kindly enlighten me...

My favorite.. hmm. it's hard... and you tease us for the "10 year gap" book. Hate you and love you in the same time. LOL


message 2: by Katherine (new)

Katherine Scattolin 10 YEAR GAP: Why? Kristy Bromberg your a cheeky tease and I love that in you because is comes through in your writing. Looking forward to the 10 Year Gap and also your Secret Project.


message 3: by Jonna (new)

Jonna Jean My favorite is Sweet Ache, BUT 10 year gap? Wow. What a tease!


message 4: by O'Baroness (new)

O'Baroness Well... "What. The. Fuck?" Is really a good entry, more so when you know it's Colton's exclaiming, and even more so when it's in audio ))) so this one is the best among given!
The first of "Sweet ache" is also nnniiice one )))
The first from "Hard beat" is charged with emotions, intriguing also
And of course no need to say about the secret one ))

Waiting impatiently for mor of your addictive, complicated men!


message 5: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Keyes Fueled!!!!!


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