Critiques for U: June Edition

CONTEST CLOSED!

Well, it’s time for this month’s Critiques 4 U contest, and usually I have some kind of pithy, witty intro. But I’ve been knee-deep in contracts for the past week, and I’m all out of humor.

Why all the contracts, you ask? Well, they’re in preparation for the awesome NEW SOFTWARE PRODUCT that Angela and I have in the works. You can read more about One Stop For Writers™ here, and if you’re interested in getting all the up-to-date info as we approach our Fall release, you can also sign up for the One Stop newsletter.

But for now…let’s do some critiques!

If you’re working on a first page and would like some objective feedback, leave a comment that includes: 

1) your email address


2) your story’s genre (no erotica, please)
3) the intended audience
~ONLY ENTRIES THAT FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTIONS WILL BE CONSIDERED~ 

Three commenters’ names will be randomly drawn and posted tomorrow. If you win, you can email me your first page and I’ll offer my feedback. Best of luck!

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