Do you want to join the proud, the not-so-few, the critiqued by Janette Rallison?

Not to brag, (I’m totally bragging) but I’ve critiqued manuscripts/or manuscript sections by Ally Condie, James Dashner, Sarah Eden, Donna Hatch, Kelly Oram, Julie Ann Donaldson, Sarah Larsen, Erin Summerill, Betsy Love, and many others. Most of these authors are even still speaking to me. Although Sarah Eden claims to hear my voice in her head while she writes, saying, “What is your character’s goal? Just staying alive, is not a valid goal.”

The point is, I’m a tough critiquer, but I’m thorough about writing and content. (I’m not a copy editor, so don’t expect any help with your commas.) Consider it tough love for your characters.

As part of a silent auction Brock Booher (also a critique survivor) is putting on to raise money for a battered women’s shelter, I’ll be auctioning off some items, and one of them is a critique of your first 100 pages of your manuscript.

You can see this item and many more here: http://www.32auctions.com/organizations/20584/auctions/23633?reset_filter=1