Colorful Critique: Morning in Three Dimensions
Title: Morning in Three Dimensions
Word Count: about 2600
Summary: A slice of life sci-fi story in which a young girl and her family engage in their usual morning routine. A tiny breakfast and flight practice ensue.
Specific Concerns: I would like to know whether or not I’m portraying the family’s ethnicity and the protagonist’s mobility issues in a “show, don’t tell” yet tasteful manner.
Triggers: Possible body horror
Rating: PG
Race/Ethnic group: Han Chinese
Feedback: For this particular piece I am analyzing
specific issues and concerns as they apply to Han Chinese characters. As I am able-bodied, I cannot offer
commentary on mobility issues. Commentary will be italicized.
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