Nose to the Grindstone: Revisions

Since my copy edits aren't here to work on, I've been working instead on the structural revision of the new new book, which for shortness I may call Nameless I because it has no title.  (Nameless II has also begun, mostly as short bits that haven't gathered momentum yet.)

As usual, the main structure seems to be holding together, but there are difficult bits that haven't found their place, and odd gaps that pretty much mark out where a plot-bomb landed on what I was doing and sent me racing off t