the Necessity of Experience

Dear friends, I'm writing a guest post for a site called DiversifYA and I'd like some help. I have a draft written and I want people to look over it for me, to make sure it's top notch before I send it off. Best foot forward, as they say.
It's titled 'The Necessity of Experience' and talks about how to write realistic characters and places, particularly when they don't fit your personal experience. You don't have to be a writer to help me with this, so please volunteer! 
If you can help, comment below or email me and I'll send it to you.
Thanks!