List rules to maintain internal consistency
What are the 
rules that ensure your story is internally consistent? Among them might be that a character will respond in the same way to the same stimuli each time the latter is encountered.
The exception would be if your character grows and develops and hence arrives at a different outlook.
Look for inconsistencies in your story’s plot, characters and theme and then rewrite the passages to correct them.
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