More with Branwyn and Malack on WIP It Up Wednesday #Wipitup

Welcome to Erotic Notions and WIP It Up Wednesday. This snippet is a continuation from my erotic medieval romance - Black Dorn.
Set Up –(for those who haven't started at the beginning – Duna means instructor – so Duna Trea is Branwyn's instructor. A Dune is one who is to be instructed. Branwyn is a Dune. Gon means King, Gon Dra means Heir to the Throne and lastly, tragor means duty.)
"Tell me where you come from? What is your land--your people—like?" Why did his deep voice make her heart beat faster? "My land is like Black Dorn but flat and not as beautiful. I have not seen so many rolling hills. Our languages are similar, but we each have words the other does not." He lay back and closed his eyes. "Such as?" "Gon. I believe it to mean king--one who rules all. Gon-Dra has no match in our language. The son of a king is a prince and the oldest is the heir to the throne, but he is not called by that title." He opened his eyes. "Are all the women from your land as beautiful as you?" Branwyn felt a flush run from her belly to her scalp. "My six cousins were not as…" She looked at the creek. Her voice softened. "Which is why I was sent to be trained." Malack sat up. He moved closer -- too close. "Standing beside you, even the most beautiful of cousins would be less so. Your green eyes are like the newly born spring--alive and full of hope. Your lips…there is a flower, a rose I believe, in the garden the same color. If your lips taste as wondrous as the smell of that flower…may I kiss those lips?" "You are the gon-dra. You take—" A frown crossed his forehead. "I do not ask as gon-dra. I ask as Malack. I wish to be granted the kiss." "I am sorry if I have offended you." She pressed her fingers on his forehead and smoothed his creased brow. "A kiss from you would—" He did not let her finish her sentence. He reached behind her neck and pulled her face to his. His lips parted. She felt his breath, then nothing. "Have you been kissed before?" She lowered her eyes. "When I was being…trained, he…" "Being instructed and being kissed are as different as the day is from night. One is about tragor and the other is passion, lust and possibly love."
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Published on February 24, 2015 21:00
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