In the Beginning
I've been fighting with a new story for about a month now. I keep tossing the opening and starting over because I can't find anything I'm happy with. I probably should just keep writing and hope that getting the words out will lead to writing something that's actually worth keeping, but I haven't been able to make myself do that.
I know when the story starts--Everything gets put into motion when my heroine arrives in town. The problem is that I don't know where--exactly--it begins.
Do I open with her seeing the hero for the first time? They don't actually meet then, but she sees him and drools a little. ;-) I've trashed about 4 variations on this opening. The one that has the tone right was riddled with issues that made it unkeepable.
Do I start with her shock at how much the town has changed? I've tried this twice, but I quickly find myself bogged down in description of the differences between now and then. Who wants to read that? Not me. I always skim description in books or outright skip it depending on how much of it there is. I don't want to have readers everywhere closing the book on page one.
I contemplated backing up and starting earlier, but that's worse, I think. Although I'm still debating this one on occasion.
Coming into the story a little later than I'm thinking? That's not giving me anything to use.
This is so frustrating. Oh, well, off to trash another opening and start over. Again.
I know when the story starts--Everything gets put into motion when my heroine arrives in town. The problem is that I don't know where--exactly--it begins.
Do I open with her seeing the hero for the first time? They don't actually meet then, but she sees him and drools a little. ;-) I've trashed about 4 variations on this opening. The one that has the tone right was riddled with issues that made it unkeepable.
Do I start with her shock at how much the town has changed? I've tried this twice, but I quickly find myself bogged down in description of the differences between now and then. Who wants to read that? Not me. I always skim description in books or outright skip it depending on how much of it there is. I don't want to have readers everywhere closing the book on page one.
I contemplated backing up and starting earlier, but that's worse, I think. Although I'm still debating this one on occasion.
Coming into the story a little later than I'm thinking? That's not giving me anything to use.
This is so frustrating. Oh, well, off to trash another opening and start over. Again.
Published on February 24, 2015 08:00
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