LitWit Challenge 3.11: Stabbed in the heart, the Yucch-meter's deliberations (Complete)

Our photo of a guy with a broadsword through the heart elicited stories from a variety of genres. Read all the entries here. 1. john dorian's tale of lost love and regret. Nice effort, but the characters were too generic and featureless. The author describes the squabbles rather than letting the characters fight. The romantic [...]