Review: Immortals by Ednah Walters
Title: Immortals
Author: Ednah Walters
Publisher: Firetrail Publishing
Publication Date: January 9, 2014
Page Count: 343
Where I got it: Kindle Unlimited
Where you can get it: Amazon
How much: List Price 12.50
Format I read it in: Kindle
Description/Blurb:
The Amazon bestselling novel that continues the passionate story RAINE and TORIN from RUNES by Ednah WaltersNothing can stop Raine Cooper when she wants something…
Raine finally knows that her gorgeous neighbor, Torin St. James, is a legend straight out of Norse mythology, and that her feelings for him are strong. Torin is crazy about Raine too, breaking the one rule he lives by: Never fall for a mortal. The problem is he no longer remembers her, his memories erased by Norns—Norse destiny deities—to punish her for defying them.
So Raine comes up with a plan…
She will make Torin forget his one rule a second time and fall in love with her all over again. But she quickly learns that well-laid plans do not work when dealing with deities and supernatural beings. Desperate, Raine makes choices that could not only tear her and Torin further apart, but lead to the destruction of everything and everyone she loves.
ALSO IN THE SERIES:
Runes (book 1)
Immortal (book 2)
Grimnirs (book 2.5, Full length book, NOT a novella)
Seeress (book 3)
FROM THE AUTHOR
Thank you for making the first book in this series a hit and making Torin St. James your book crush. There’s so much in store for these two and I can’t wait to share them with you.
My Thoughts:
Immortals by Ednah Walters
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
2-2/3
I really enjoyed Runes, so when I saw that this one was available on Kindle Unlimited, I jumped at the chance to read it.
The story in and of itself was very, very good but I found myself tripping over the poorly edited prose. There were misspellings, typos and even character inconsistencies galore throughout the text. This to me soured the review of an otherwise stellar story.
The plot development was not horrible for the genre, and the story was unique enough to carry it. I with there had been a little more attention on world building, because I really couldn’t get an image in my head for any of the “scenes” in the book, but I digress.
Hopefully, a future revision will come down and the author will fix some of the editing mishaps. I really like the story, but I couldn’t really rate it higher because the editing was extremely distracting. I still want to read the rest of the story and find out what happens to Raine and Torin, and if Cora will come around, and what happens with Eirik!
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