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#amrevising my
#wip They All Died Smiling
As I go through the book start to finish, I'm so happy with where it went. No huge blunders. Yay!
Looking for ways to enrich scenes. When I write dialogue-heavy scenes, I often just write the words. Now, the #editing phase, is when I go back and add gestures or other details.
I also read through for consistency, pacing, and character development.
I found a little pacing error that was easily enough fixed. I didn't want Kassidy catching on to something right away, but her intuition had to start nagging at her a bit.
So that's my update for They all Died Smiling!
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Ronda Del Boccio
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Published on January 27, 2015 06:17