Looking for beta readers:

I'm a whisker away from finishing the first draft of...

Looking for beta readers:

I'm a whisker away from finishing the first draft of my current project, Happily Ever After, and I'm looking for people willing to rip it apart for me. At this point, I'm mostly looking for what doesn't work and what needs changing in terms of plot, pacing, characters etc. I'd like people who can look at it with in a set period, probably no more than a month per section, to keep on top of things and get responses back in a similar time frame. I understand if that's something most people can't manage.

If you are interested, drop me a message with an email address and I'll send you the first half. The book is a low fantasy novel which starts where most fantasy epics finishes and follows a woman named Lavie's struggle to get her life back together after the war is over. Synopsis:
They say that endings are just new beginnings and that could not be more true for Lavie Streaver. A noblewoman turned knight, she and her childhood friend, Harry, have fought long and hard to survive, raise an army and set the rightful heir, Prince Brendan, back on the throne. Enough blood, sweat and tears have been shed to drown the kingdom thrice over, but the war is finally over.

If the fates had been fair, their story would have ended there and they would have earned their happily ever after. But Lavie is struggling to settle down in a life without an enemy to fight. Harry finds his dreams of the future aren't matching with the reality of it. And Brendan discovers that heroes don't make good kings.

As the cracks begin to appear in the kingdom, and their friendship, Lavie finds herself turning to an unlikely source of help - the man they worked so hard to defeat.
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Published on January 16, 2015 06:41
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