Tit-Bit

Here is an excerpt from my latest creation, taken from the dark passages of my mind.

Hope you enjoy what you read, and leave me a comment about it. To date, no title for the novel slowly being born.


It felt like I was coming unhinged at the joints, like a marionette, with someone else pulling the strings, I went through the motions of digging a hole in the back yard, as deep as I could, then with revolution running through me like an electrical current I picked up the severed hand, and dropped it into the black depth of the waiting earth, that looked more like the open maw of some creature that had crawled up from the depths of hell to receive an offering, than a hole in the ground.

Thank you.
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Published on January 08, 2015 04:24
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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh how you tease us Paul!! Hurry and finish!!


message 2: by Paul (new)

Paul Zunckel Hi Angel,

From your reaction, I gather that you liked the tit-bit.

Only at 31000 words which is about half way, but I will keep you in the loop...Take care.


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