The Not So Good Review

Okay,read my first bad review of an excerpt of With Loyalty Came Love. The first chapter was presented for preview. Twenty-six people read it, but only one left a review.

I read the review and wanted to cry as it was one star and stated the work had too many mixed tense.

However, I looked at what they read and realized she is correct. I remember that I wrote down to fix what she spoke of and thought I had done so. Yet, I am mistaken as that preview does have mix tense.

So, I put up the next chapter and invited criticism. Its my first novel and I am working better on the second.