Want to Walk Through a Bit of My Editing Process?

First drafts can be real stinkers. They're rough (hence the alternate name) and going back to them after letting the book rest can sometimes be painful. But if you never edit, you're never going to get anywhere.

Today, I thought I'd walk you through the first paragraph of a (as of yet untitled) book to show you just how much a few words can change with poking and prodding. This is what happens