An exhilarating first chapter that sets the tone of suspense and action immediately in this excellent crime thriller. Great characterization as we learn of Lorne's determination and hatred of her menacing nemesis, The Unicorn. This narrative reminds me of watching a good movie about tormented authorities versus an elusive, deadly criminal. Well written, interesting plot - already, compelling characters, suspenseful, and overall, well worth supporting! Best of luck with this great piece of fiction, Mel. LG.
Published on October 20, 2010 04:32