Three Roses Redux Redux Redux

Roger Eichorn here.  My resolve is a pathetic thing.  I just couldn’t stay away!

Click here for the opening chapter of the refurbished Three Roses.  I even have a map, though it leaves much to be desired.  (I have only the most rudimentary understanding of how Campaign Cartographer works.)

As always, any and all comments are most welcome.  I’m especially interested in general impressions:  Do you like it?  Would you keep reading?  Did you keep reading?  If not, where did you stop, and why?  That sort of thing.  In the wise words of the Princess Irulan, “A beginning is the time for taking the most delicate care that the balances are correct.”  So how are my balances?