Big, big difference between:
"…he’d only been a boat a handful of times in his...

Big, big difference between:


"…he’d only been a boat a handful of times in his life."


and


"…he’d only been on a boat a handful of times in his life.”


Editing: Keeping Characters from Spontaneously Shape-Shifting.

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Published on November 07, 2014 08:00
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