Saving Will - New Work in Process (WIP)

Saving Will - Chapter 1, paragraph 1
“I am not your friend!” The words exploded out in the staccato lecturer’s voice that irritated Jessie more than almost anything else I was known to do. And I did a lot that irritated my some days oh-so-typical teenage daughter.  “I am your mother!”

First chapter of my WIP. What is your opinion on reading first person point of view? I know some people love it while some hate it. I'm having fun writing in it for now, it really keeps me from head hopping from character to character.
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Published on November 04, 2014 07:43
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