Black Dorn on WIP It Up Wednesday #wipitup

Welcome to Erotic Notions and WIP It Up Wednesday. This snippet is a continuation from my erotic medieval romance - Black Dorn. Set Up – Branwyn and her serving girl are having an early morning chat. Leah is bathing Branwayn.
(for those who haven't started at the beginning with this – Duna means instructor – so Duna Trea is Branwyn's instructor. A Dune is one who is to be instructed. Branwyn is a Dune. Gon means King and lastly Gon Dra means Heir to the Throne.)
"Leah, tell me about my rescuer. He is a handsome man. Brutish, but handsome." Leah giggled. "The other serving girls have heard their dunes say he is the handsomest man in all the land. His name is Gon-Dra Malack. He will become Gon Malack when he inherits the castle and rules all." "You said the gon will inherit the castle, lands and people. How can he inherit people?" Branwyn knelt so Leah could pour water down her back. "As gon, he will rule you. That I understand. But, own you?" She sighed. "Alas, again, I do not understand." Leah rubbed soap into a towel and carefully wiped Branwyn's face then rinsed it. "The land is his to inherit." "I understand. What is a king without land." "What is a gon without people. Did your family not sell you?" Leah sat back on her haunches. She brushed the sweat off her forehead.""Yes." Branwyn chewed her bottom lip. "Although I refuse to think about it that is exactly what happened to me. I was sold as my uncle would have sold one of his cows."
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