Finding the Descriptive Balance

Yesterday I read Kristan Higgins' new release In Your Dreams. It was a very good book. I finished it in a few hours.  One thing I did notice is how many times she described Jack's blue eyes. Seriously. A lot.

 Which made me realize  that I don't. Ever. I describe a character when they come on the scene, but then I forget about it. I think I might have to work on that.

Imagine the words I could add to my manuscript if I kept reminding readers what colors Dex's eyes are or how mel...
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Published on October 02, 2014 09:11
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