Black Dorn on WIP It Up Wednesday #wipitup

Welcome to Erotic Notions and WIP It Up Wednesday. This next snippet is a continuation from 2 weeks ago from my erotic medieval romance - Black Dorn.

Set Up –Brawnyn is informed that she must learn "the needs of the bed" before  she is married. She is shocked and needs time to think.
Trea brushed a stray hair from her face. Your instruction begins tomorrow." Branwyn tilted her head. "I am to be married tomorrow?" "No, your master does not want you until you have been trained. You are useless to him until—no." Trea put her hand up. "Wander about the castle. Do not speak to anyone unless they speak to you first. Go." Branwyn stood, curtsied and left. Her steps sounded hollow as she descended the staircase. Leah waited at the bottom. "Come, Dune Branwyn. Relax by the flower gardens. You have heard much, and are confused. You need time to think." She led the way to the castle gardens."Leah, you are a magical person. You seem to read my very thoughts." Branwyn sat on a bench beneath a large shade tree. She looked up at the great castle called Black Dorn with its dark, grey, stone walls and four towering turrets dominating over the landscape. The power and size of Black Dorn contrasted against the peace of the fragrant and colorful flower gardens near where she sat. "May I wander about the garden?" "Oh yes, enjoy yourself, Dune Branwyn." The scents and colors distracted Branwyn from the puzzling information she had learned that morning. A path through the rose garden led her to a maze. She remembered enjoying running in and out of a maze's paths when her aunt and uncle had taken her to a spring festival at the duke’s manor. After going around only a few corners of the hedge-lined paths, Branwyn thought she heard voices. Had she reached the end so quickly? She turned a corner and put her hand to her mouth to stifle a gasp. Before her, stood a woman tied to the bush with arms and legs stretched wide. She was naked, except for a cloak that shielded her back from the hedge. Two men stood before her each suckling a breast like a young babe, with their hands frantically moving in front of them and grunts escaping their filled mouths. The one on the right gasped, and a stream of fluid shot out from him and sprayed the woman’s belly. A moment later, the same occurred with the other man. Branwyn retreated and raced through pathways. She brushed against the rough hedge, stumbled and fell. Breathless, she stood, ran forward a few feet and turned at what she prayed to be the exit. She skidded to a stop. Before her were two naked men locked in the same position she’d seen with her uncle’s dog and bitch. The kneeling man gasped for air as he mercilessly pounded himself against the other. The blindfolded man on his hands and knees screamed as the kneeling man arched his back and emitted a long howl. Branwyn tuned, bounced of the hedge and fled in whatever direction the path before her went. She raced through the maze, hoping the next path would lead her to the exit. Her heart pounded as her legs grew weary. She slowed her pace. Before her, a small opening appeared where a section of hedge was dead. She forced her way through, glad to be free of the terrifying place, but concerned as to where she now stood. The maze she just passed through now blocked her view of the castle and gardens. With no one around, Branwyn fought back tears as a cold shudder of fear raced through her. She refused to re-enter the maze and make her way back to the entrance. Which way to turn? Left or right? She collapsed onto the ground and heaved a troubled sigh. 



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